Wednesday, August 06, 2008

Puddles of Maddness

I wanted more from you than you even had.
How does a man fall so hard and become so blind.
Is it because of a darkness inside of you,
That some how blinds me?
Now I swim in puddles of madness.
Never completely immersed,
But covered none the less.

Nov 07
Cordell Rich
This is for you little girl.

6 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

Once again in few words you have managed to paint a clear image in my mind. Well done.

10:59 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Is it true that there is no place never visited... it is my place... any one else was an intruder..! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

11:05 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Striking images here!

11:06 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Another of your fine write..nice piece.

10:33 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

i am sad to say i have been on both sides of these feelings.... mostly giving unknowingly. good work

12:30 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Lovely metaphore, puddles says so many things, I like your minimalistic writng

9:08 AM  

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