Puddles of Maddness
I wanted more from you than you even had.
How does a man fall so hard and become so blind.
Is it because of a darkness inside of you,
That some how blinds me?
Now I swim in puddles of madness.
Never completely immersed,
But covered none the less.
Nov 07
Cordell Rich
This is for you little girl.
How does a man fall so hard and become so blind.
Is it because of a darkness inside of you,
That some how blinds me?
Now I swim in puddles of madness.
Never completely immersed,
But covered none the less.
Nov 07
Cordell Rich
This is for you little girl.
6 Comments:
Once again in few words you have managed to paint a clear image in my mind. Well done.
Is it true that there is no place never visited... it is my place... any one else was an intruder..! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Striking images here!
Another of your fine write..nice piece.
i am sad to say i have been on both sides of these feelings.... mostly giving unknowingly. good work
Lovely metaphore, puddles says so many things, I like your minimalistic writng
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