Break Me if You Can
Dear Ms.
Drowned me with your storms.
Cursh me with your words.
Wound me with your lashes.
Bind me with your tyranny.
Melt my soul with your eyes.
Break me if you can.
Scream at me please.
But give me no more
of your silence.
Copyright © Cordell Rich 2008
http://www.coffeeconnection.co.uk/poems/2192-break-me-if-you-can.html
Drowned me with your storms.
Cursh me with your words.
Wound me with your lashes.
Bind me with your tyranny.
Melt my soul with your eyes.
Break me if you can.
Scream at me please.
But give me no more
of your silence.
Copyright © Cordell Rich 2008
http://www.coffeeconnection.co.uk/poems/2192-break-me-if-you-can.html
Labels: Love Poems, love poetry, poetry
posted by "The Prince" John Pierce, Wade Garrett, Richard Dangler. I have many names. at 9:55 AM
6 Comments:
Very explicit expression of a heart filled with pain and desolation. Great write!
I can feel the frustration!!! This is so 'with life'.
the poem hast a deep feeling and it sounds very real.it's nice and very real ,even the feeling is deep from within.abdirahim
WOW!!! This is sooo true. Silence kills everything. This reminded me of so many things. Loved it!
Silence, the great equalizer, I use it myself many times
i guess sometimes the silence of the loved one can be harder to endure than any other sort of punishment...i enjoy the passion inside your words...and the fact that you didn't try to put it in a certain form gives this poem a certain air of savageness, of attempt to escape...very nice!
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